READ- Pure Blood

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My first attempt at trying to get a story, that I have wanted to tell for some time, down on the page. Not only trying to reveal the basic premise of the story, I had to try and make it understandable ….in eight pages.  I, of course, failed miserably, not because the story I have in my head isn’t a good one,  but because I tried to tell as much story as I could. First mistake.

I had epic plans for characters, and plot lines, but I tried too much too fast. I made the mistake of not giving this to enough people to read,  people  who wouldn’t be nice and tell me I did a great job. I think most of them were happy enough with the art, they looked past how convoluted the eight pages were! Second mistake.

I realize not everyone can see where this is going…..well I bet no one could!lol I was just so excited to submit it to ZUDA, I didn’t stop to think that no one else would get it! Third mistake

Well, would’ve, should’ve, could’ve. I won’t make the same mistakes again, and look at it as a learning experiance. ZUDA editors know their stuff, and I know that I will do much better next time! I am looking forward to helpful critiques!


4 responses to “READ- Pure Blood

  1. Andrea

    June 30, 2009 at 5:52 pm

    Hey Ryano, the first page of this comic almost looks like a painting! Your art is definitely your strong point, I had a hard time understanding what was happening. The 2nd page was way too busy, and maybe if you pull the camera back a bit, it won’t feel so cluttered. Other than that I liked it! LOL
    Keep going, your next one looks very promising! Superheros are underrated, Zuda needs a good superhero comic!


    • ryanovision

      June 30, 2009 at 7:13 pm

      My thoughts exactly!! Glad you liked it, although I’m glad this was not my first comic on Zuda, I can do better!
      Thanks for checkin it out!


  2. Frank Scurley

    October 16, 2009 at 1:29 am

    I dont know If I said it already but …This blog rocks! I gotta say, that I read a lot of blogs on a daily basis and for the most part, people lack substance but, I just wanted to make a quick comment to say I’m glad I found your blog. Thanks, 🙂

    …..Frank Scurley


  3. Savannah

    October 17, 2009 at 2:05 am

    Awesome blog!

    I thought about starting my own blog too but I’m just too lazy so, I guess Ill just have to keep checking yours out.



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